Hi everyone. In my previous post, I sent you a logo design and asked, “Does it look like a mouse?” After that post, I realized that the nose didn’t resemble a ink pen tip at all. Therefore, after removing the ears, my first task was to try and make the nose look more like a pen tip. Personally, it looks too short; maybe I’ll draw the logo from scratch. What do you think? Do you think it’s too short?
Maybe if you lower the whiskers to be closer to the nose it will read better.
Also be mindful of the symmetry, and make sure your shapes are clean, you have some bumps here and there that make the design a little messy.
I think you can make this idea work, remember: less is more.